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Taken

Siblings
taken from
this world
before
their time.

At least
They're
Together.

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  • penman gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • intanglio2ring
    August 23, 2007

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    Oooo!

    Now that would be such a loss!
    Very sad on this one - unexpected tragedy!
    Thanks for a great entry!
    Tang


    • burdened
      August 23, 2007
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      Thankyou for your comment, I appreciate it, thankyou for an honourable mention. Xx


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    very heart felt piece.. Good luck


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    this is touching
    and has heart
    cutting pain to it.


  • esroddo silver member
    August 23, 2007

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    So true that really touched home I can relate to those lines, Good luck great write. LISA


    • burdened
      August 23, 2007
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      thankyou for your comment, it is appreciated. Xx

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