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Brothers...

Two became one,
one that mourned
in childlike fashion
his angel passing.

Author notes

This picture is on a collector plate that I keep as a memorial to my stillborn twin son, John Edward 4-22-79.

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  • Meme Wheeler
    August 23, 2007

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    So very beautiful. We always hold a vigil in our hearts for the loved ones we've lost. Amazingly one day we shall meet again.


  • burdened
    August 23, 2007

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    A beautiful piece, deserving of the trophy, and I am sorry for your loss, but he is looking down on you, with love. Xx


  • intanglio2ring
    August 23, 2007

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    I can feel your pain!

    I too have lost a son he was 3. Also had a friend who lost one of the twins - forever to look on one for the reflection of two! My condolences
    But an absolute great entry!
    Tang


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    i love it great write. Good luck


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    that is a sad thing,
    I am sorry for your lost,
    and your poem is wonderful


  • esroddo silver member
    August 23, 2007
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    Oh how sad, But now his an angel in the sky, My heart goes out to you good luck LISA

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