She left me unscathed,
Wrapped up in a world of pleasure,
All the time we spend,
Brings us closer together.
She spun me in her web,
Soft as silk, strong as lead,
The patterns running on continous loop,
Over and over, in my head.
Her pale blue eyes that stare me down,
And when she leaves i begin to frown,
The whiff of scent as she turns around,
She walks away, this silence is loud..
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i like this one..it took a while to finish
Please tell me what you think
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very good, well written and plenty of thought included here. very good,
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WHOA!!!!! Dude this is really deep and has so much meaning and beauty. This was worth taking a while. The last stanza was amazing. It was sooo beautiful and had sooooo much awesomeness in it.
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You write some of the best stuff. Everything is short but within the few lines there's a lot going on. I love these and I hope you like them too. lol
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omg this is absolutely amazing
awesome imagery
its so beautiful
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