Four years of high school,
Four years of friendship.
What will happen now
As those years are ending?
Will we stick together
Like we said we would?
Or in the end will we part
Only to occassionally meet?
I'm scared to admit it
But I do not have an answer
To all of these questions
That are swimming in my head.
I may not know what's coming next.
But I'm sure of one thing,
If I can keep us together
I will by any means necessary.
I can only hope that you will too
Because no matter how hard I try
I can't keep us as us
Without both me and you
Author notes
This is a sort of thank you message to my friends; as well as an acknowledgement of my need for my friends.
So friends thank you!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I can relate, I just finished secondary school and it seems like my friends are scattering to the four corners of the country. Hope things work out for both of us.
This is a nice poem, I'm sure they get the message. -
This is a wonderful poem. You did a good job on it and I really enjoyed reading it. Great job and keep writing!
-Karin- -
Nice sentiments
But not my style of poetry. I would try to offer constructive criticism but I do not understand free verse
When I left school, along time ago
Things were so different, life rather slow
Some of my friends I have not seen again
With others I find that the friendships remain
New friends at college, at work, or the pub
Mean that all through your life you belong to a club
So remember, look forward, and remember the past
And go on to new challenges, but don't go too fast! -
This is cute
My first impression is this is a cute poem and you would be a good friend to have. I can feel your wish to keep things as they are. This is easy to read and as such is not awkward. I wouldn't change any thing about it. I liked all of it, it is all good. The title is just right for this poem and the first line sets the tone very well. The last line couldn't be better. A very nice poem I enjoyed it very much.
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