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The Call

What is love to you I wonder?
You come back from far away
Wanting me to take you back
How can this be all you say?

How dare you call me on the phone
And tell me that you love me
I can't deal with this right now
But that's something you can't see

You don't know what that felt like
You won't ever learn of the pain
(Excrutiating, blinding, and painful)
I feel everytime that it rains

The rain is the thing that I remember
From the night you left me there
You walked away with her in your arms
Leaving me only able to cry and stare

And now you come back full of love
Asking me, begging me to take you back
How can you expect me to do this for you
You broke my heart, this you know for a fact

But I know you something else as well
You know how much I still love you
You know my love is beyond compare
And that you are in everything I do

But I can't deal with this right now
I have to start bracing myself for the fall
I'll decide eventually what I want
What you have to do what I did, wait for the call

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My {♥}heart doesn't beat the way it used too.
LittleMissGiggles08

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  • WishMeAway--x
    August 23, 2007

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    this is exactly almost to a point what happened in my life. omg.


    x--speechless--x



    ♥.lovelove.
    PrettyLady


  • Shockerloba
    August 23, 2007

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    You tell 'em... you can do better anyway pet! You don't have to pour your heart out for people who are unworthy. This is a very nice heartfelt poem.


  • Erin200
    August 23, 2007

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    This is a wonderful poem. You did a good job on it and I really enjoyed reading it. Great job and keep writing!

    -Karin-