Remember me
in twenty years
remember our care free love
that made us forget our fears
Remember the kisses
that seemed to stop time
remember your fingers
laced gracefully through mine
remember the talks
we had late at night
remember the times
when we never would fight
Remember the names
we called eachother
remember when we
wanted love from no other
Remember me
when your hearts been broken
and remember the words
I truthfully had spoken
even though
our times came to an end
in my heart
you'll always be a friend
I'll always remember
the times we shared
and how for a few weeks
i thought someone cared
I'll always love you
and we'll allways be close
even though to end our relationship
was the path you chose
I forgive you
for being naive
for i believed your lies
silly me.
but its all in the past
no need to dwell
in a love
that didnt last.
Author notes
1.Casually Upset=SN
2.what if we were all so achingly in love?
A contest entry
- Know What Its Like To Feel?[♥] by WishMeAway--x.
700 points, ended September 12, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a little simple but good
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Great
Really fab work, loved it. Good luck in the comp! -
omg this is great...
i really really like this....
its just perfect...
great job and good luck in the contest...
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wow, this was going one way
and then it totally went left. shit.
this was amazing. that carefree love where everything is perfect and you dont believe that anything will ever die.
great job and good luck
♥.lovelove.
PrettyLady
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