Movement a medium
granted so graciously
to gradients
poignantly
posing in
winds.
Ocean of malachite
meandering onward
moving through
strands of
untangible
trends
Bountiful blades in
unanimous
motion
licked by the
mistrals
forever
unseen.
So zealous these
zephyrs
appearing as
spectres
gleefully placing
impressions
on
green.
Author notes
This is option one. I'm so glad you thought that option up. There are many beautiful things all around us. Things that we see everyday but that we very rarely take the time to look at. Anyone who knows anything about life knows that there is a difference between "seeing" and "looking." I hope that everyone takes the time to stop and "look" at things and not just "see" them.
I hope you enjoyed this piece.
Here is a fun supplementary poem I wrote to this one.
The Green Question
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3335352
Do you see what I see? What do you see?
Comments
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totally awsomee!
green is my fav color of all time, so i waz really drawn to the title, i think it was very well writen keep writing, ur pretty goud at it
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Wow. the imagery in this piece is awesome
I think that I can really see what you see here. Well done!! -
Nothing quite as soothing and peaceful as laying on a bed of rich green grass on a warm summer day as you look up into sky of blue beauty with a few soft and puffy white clouds.
This is what your poem reminded me of.
Thanks for sharing this creation with us
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Bravo! nice... one!
I love green! The taste of green, the feel of green. Unlike any other color, green is the man.
Cool yet warm, dark with a dash of light....
Great poem, I feel that you and I think a like when it comes to green. Loved the write.
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OH!! lovely
Very nice imagination. I would love to read you next poem. I really like the humour in this write. Ithink you would do well in the future. I am amazed by the balance with the words you had used and it is really admirable.
I creates a beautifull image in the mind.
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Love it. Green is my favorite color so you automatically had me at hello!
This was very soothing to read... I could almost hear it in a song... something Irish of course. Nice job. The description is stunning.
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Very descriptive of the color green in a quiet unique way. The shape of this was stunning in and of itself, adding to its simplicity.
While reading your authors notes, I can honestly say I totally agree with the difference of seeing and just simply looking.
My favorite part...
Movement a medium
granted so graciously
to gradients
poignantly
posing in
winds.
Becky
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well you certainly described green to its utmost standards Green is soch a deep color and a great poetry topic What else would it be mystery nature clean and untainted i dont know but it probably is one of my favorite colr right up there with purple ok i know rambling great poem
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Packed full of imagery I love the flow how it never breaks a lovely poem penned here I love the authors comments also grat title all around a real enjoyable read
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You've brought something so simple and un-noticed much more respect and appreciation than I could have imagined. I commend your word choice,
impressive impressions.
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I can't tell if it's because I'm reading her too much or you are writing based upon her style, but this poem seriously makes me think of how Emily Dickinson wrote. Your concept of nature is very appealing and your choice of description is magnificent! I very much enjoyed this piece. I created a poem with this very style so I can relate to your creativity and mind-work. Very good job! I have no constuctive criticism. Good luck in the contest!
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Much Appreciated
I will admit that I have focused on myself when it comes to poetry. To be perfectly honest, I havent read much poetry outside of what people write here on allpoetry and what I have written myself. So, I am happy to be compared to someone such as Emily Dickinson, though I have not read any of her poetry. I don't know if its because I haven't the desire or if I'm afraid great poets such as Emily might rub off and effect the way I write.
Either way, thanks for the comment and the luck!
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