Colored kernals
are color blind
No prejudice
No poppin' off
Only seekin' sunshine~
United in rows
Joined at the hip
Cobs of the basket
basking in union
To serve Humankind~
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - 10/30/30 by CarolDesjarlais.
425 points, ended August 23, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i love that line "cobs of the basket" like a family get together.
congrats on a wonderful write
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Wonderful metaphor you've applied here, Nicholas. You do have a wonderful eye... I've always believed that anyone that can make poetry from ordinary things is a true poet. Congrats on the gold trophy....it goes so well with this wonderful and very thought-provoking poem. Wonderful!!
~ Nicolette
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This is beautiful, Nicholas, what wonderful imagery and message in this poem, congrats on your gold, my friend!
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Thank you, Tara! I got lucky
Nah, It was good!
See ya 'round, Friend. ~ Nicholas
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Congratulation On the Gold Impressive write
Amazing piece well deserved the Gold, Wonderfully expressed.
LISA
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Your SILVER was jus' as amazin' Lisa, we kinda thought along the same lines! Thank you for your kind words, my Friend. ~ Nicholas
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Great my friend! Fab analogy. To bad the world can't see we are all colored kernals! wonderful write, best of luck in your contest! Kelly
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Hey Kelly! I'm glad we think alike... I was
surprized when I garnished GOLD! Thank you for your ongoing support, Friend. ~ Nicholas
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what a great analogy! ty for entering.
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I love ya Carol!
Thank you for the Gold, my friend! ~ Nicholas
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