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Fall Welcomer

indian corn
the fall welcomer
with brisk chanting colors
autumn brings in the harvest
of snuggling dreams
closed windows divide
use from nature's shivers
into warming chimneys
and cider warmth

A contest entry

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 23, 2007
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    oh what great sensory images come this poem...thank you..

  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 23, 2007
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    Closed…you have until 3:35 pm est to finalize and edit…


  • LadyLeviathan silver member
    August 23, 2007

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    ooooo i love all the descriptions in this short but sweet master piece. great write! good luck in the contest!