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Black Skies & Cotton Candy

Rose petals fall
from a sky black as pitch.
They rot when you catch them
on your tongue.
The lollipop bobs between
your ruby-red lips,
reminding you of a
love lost,
love festered.
Like cotton candy,
everything turns to ash.
Swallow it down.
Sip this poison as you would wine,
let it sting your cut-up mouth.
The rain makes your eyes bleed
tears of ink,
of black,
to match the sky.

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  • Symptom.X
    October 3, 2007
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    yanno what, this one reminds me of The Candy Darlings.
    i like it skye-girl

  • x ShyGirl x
    August 25, 2007
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    I really like this.
    Is anything wrong??


    • October.
      August 25, 2007
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      No, actually. For once, everything's right. Thanks, girly.