I see myself a nervous wreck;
I feel the sky caving in on me.
The world sees a blond man;
I see a blind man.
The world sees a bearded man;
I see a weird man.
I look into the mirror;
I wonder why I'm still breathing.
My heart is broken no longer beating;
The world sees a caring man.
I no longer see that man;
I do not wish to see him any more.
My heart stopped beating many years ago;
But the world she never knew.
Author notes
'My {♥}heart doesn't beat the way it used too.'
Kimojuno (By Request of Contest Holder).
Option {1}.
A contest entry
- Spinning Me In Circles[lets put my heart back together] by WishMeAway--x.
700 points, ended September 19, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I can definitely feel the emotion behind your words, quite a write you have here.
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Thank you!
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Wow that is super powerful write
It really made me think. The write was totally amazing. I had to read it again I liked it so much. I could feel your words.
LISA
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Thank you for reading and your wonderful comments.
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Loved it! All of it! Great work and good luck!
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Thank you.
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My heart is broken no longer beating;
The world sees a caring man.
i know this one, the whole entire poem. being something you really arent and you gave me this air of mystery.
completely loved it.
good luck
♥.lovelove.
PrettyLady -
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Yes.
The world sees the phantom that truly does not exist, and yet they do not want to see what is really there. They prefer the fake to the real, even though they pretend to be friends. Most people would say 'aw' or something, but to be honest that is how life is, we put on this veal and wear it as if no one can see us. And truth is .. most don't even want to.
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