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Road Kill (haiku)

Family vacation
Emotions on a high roll
When will we go home?

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  • individuality gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    my whole life is a mad vacation, the road needs some new tarmac though i think and a few more pit stops


  • Melodies
    August 23, 2007

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    Isn't that the truth! Yes!

    I am reminded of this very situation and those exact words and it makes me glad to stay home and avoid the turmoil. A fine haiku, dear one!