Why are you F**king with my heart?
Are you trying to tear it apart....?
-------Love Hurtz-------9-15-03
I thought you loved me,
I guess I was wrong.
I'll be leaving now,
and saying so long.
-------Adios Papi-------9-15-03
I know you want me,
I see you looking.
But you can't have me...
Cuz I'm tooken....
-------Too Late--------9-15-03
Like a bird, soaring through the sky,
or a beautiful flower in a field of grass,
You caught my eye.
I can't let this feeling pass.
If i cage the bird, it won't be free,
If i pluck the flower, it will die.
In contentment I'll let my love be
so the flower can grow, and the bird can fly.
----------Em0t!ons-------9-15-03
( these are all poems i can't think of endings to....if u have any suggestions, they'd be most appreciated....)
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Written September 15th, 2003
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thank u for ur comment....that sounds great....i had to drop my jaw when i read that...i would have never thought of something like that....great job...!!
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Like a bird, soaring through the sky,
or a beautiful flower in a field of grass,
You caught my eye.
I can't let this feeling pass.
If I cage the bird it won't be free
If I pluck the flower it will die.
In contentment I'll let my love be
so the flower can grow and the bird can fly.
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Well, I think I can help a little with the first one...
What could I ever have done wrong
to lose my place in your shining throng
Look at the ragged pieces on the floor
Should I love you less or more?
That's all I can think up right now.
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