Neither the brilliant view of the sunset
nor the breathtaking beauty of a unsettled stream
can draw my eyes from your sultry gaze
My murmurs are only mere echos
as the pounding of our heartbeats in unison
drown out everything but you
I am captive to your unbridled passion
held completely within the strength of your need
slave to my own desire
more than lust
I am lost
in love
A contest entry
- Ummm ... romance I think?! by Tattboyspet.
700 points, ended August 29, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Wow!
So very passionet!I loved reading this.Your work is always a joy for me to read.I just wish you'd write more.Love ya,Tracy
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thank you
just something that I noticed: murmers should be murmurs -
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Thanks for the correction.-fixed
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