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Right now I'm so confused,
Puzzled and misled.
I know its not intentional,
but your messing up my head.
Its everything your doing
and also what you said
your engaged to be married,
but you want to take me to bed.

I still have love for you,
regardless how you feel.
I hate to stop and think
was our love real?
I'm going to leave you alone
I'm going to learn to deal.
I guess as time goes on
my broken heart will heal.

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Written September 15th, 2003

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  • ReignPhyre
    September 28, 2003
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    That's deep babe, good words and heartfelt thoughts... Honestly works better with correct punctuation... Unless of course that's what you were going for... Hope it all ended well,
    RP


  • zeltria
    September 16, 2003
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    i think u did the right thing by sending that guy packing
    he doesnt deserve u or the girl hes about 2 marry
    theey say that time heals all wounds and they r right
    just hold on in there and itll b alright soon

  • EmB016
    September 15, 2003
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    Well, it sounds like you're in a difficult situation. It's hard when your heart feels one thing and your head is telling you something else. I know how that feels. This person sounds like they're just playing with your heart and emotions because they really don't know what they want. If you let this person go, time will heal your broken heart, as hard as it may seem right now. It won't always hurt as much. Take care and I hope everything works out for you.


    ~Emberly~