Every morning
I wake up and hear the birds chirp
I shoot up and say school is coming!
then i get a can of soda and get on the computer then i burp
Talking to my friends on aim is the best
eating sweets all day long is great!
knowing that school is coming soon
means that i wont be on the computer till very late
Once school comes i am gonna be so happy
I mean 2 hour early dismisal yay!
I get to have a different variety of food,
right there on my tray!
Then i think more about school
about 2 weeks later homework comes!
I finally get to feel responsible!
Well sorry i got to run!
Just remember
Summer is fun
but so is school when you get used to it
when school comes just walk into the room with a smile
and choose your desk then sit
A contest entry
- Ages 13 & Under ONLY ~ Back to School Blues/Summer Fun by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended September 1, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Very true and very cute. You did a great job on this piece. I like the comparisons 
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I liked it. I used to hate it when summer ended and school began. Everything I did during the summer seemed to come to a screaching halt. Ok, not really. I just didn't get to do those things for extended amounts of time.
Keep writing.
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