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air ramble

cloud shadows- islands of
the water
ideas of clouds
cloud fields
patchwork quilt of little
england, short channel

i was tripping on an insomniac
flight, grinning stupid as the earth
unfolded beneath, and the clouds played
and showed their secrets alongside.
i, a prophet, a cloud-fellow, in a
magic metal box- i could've stepped
down, i could've.

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something i wrote on my first flight, and after. ideas

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  • christopheshea
    August 23, 2007
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    but you didn't step down hoorah!