Silence can weave-
the perfect geometrical figures-
of poetry.
Width and length
precisely measured
in a heartbeat. Like the heart's beat.
Counting means and ways
addressing vowels
and consonants
aligned with the stars
through its stellar trance
in its correct address-
will render the linear
sides of a poet's poetry.
All in the hope of the night.
Author notes
Written August 23, 2007
For Night Hope. Take care my friend
In a list
A contest entry
- Night Hope by Cat.
8008 points, ended August 24, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this is a very well written work here, Again you show your talent well done I liked this
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in a heartbeat. Like the heart's beat.
Don't understand that line. Might just be me, I'm not fully awake yet.
Other than that one line, I loved this piece, your a wonderful writer, with a lot of talent..
-Danneh<3
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WOW! This is beautiful! I have been reading more of your poetry these last few days, and I am so impressed by the beauty and poetic expression of your words...this is lovely and she really liked it!
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What a lovely, tight piece of writing that captures Wanda's essence in so many beautiful ways. Loved the "stellar trance" you've weaved into these words - they do shine, just like she does. Thank you for sharing this lovely tribute with us - and especially with Wanda.
~ Nicolette
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An outstanding understanding of our Wanda! I'm sure she will love it!!
Good luck in the contest, Poet!
~ Nicholas
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"Silence can weave-
the perfect geometrical figures-
of poetry."
What a lovely, intelligent penning this is, my Friend...Thank you so much for writing this wonderful poem for me...Such grand imagery within...Good luck in Mary & Nic's contest, Sweetie... Wanda
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what a wonderful write to our wanda- this is such a sweet, concise piece of poetry with all the poetic elements that wanda loves- just wonderful- thank you so much for joining us in this tribute to night hope
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