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Soon the long dark hall will once again
be my nightly company. The clock,
hung on the wall above the night staff desk,
will tick away all memory of a quest
that took me out beyond the great divide,
beyond the piebald plains, the rolling lakes,
to where low mountains undulate with elms
beneath a broad and ever changing sky.

Soon I'll fight to recollect the reason
I ventured out so far away from home,
camping out beside the stillest waters
I've ever known, and underneath the shade
of canopies exotic to my eyes,
where all night long the air was filled with song
so thick, so alien, so magical,
that waking life took on the hues of dream.

Soon I'll wonder as I check dim rooms
if I imagined mysteries of light
that rose above serene Wisconsin waters,
or flashed beneath abrupt Ohio clouds,
or hovered through a Pennsylvania dusk,
or streaked across an Adirondack night,
each meteor ephemeral as mists
evaporating in the morning sun.

Soon I'll watch adventure drift from mind,
cast upon the seas of daily life,
the billowed sail that held that wild wind
shrinking in the distance from my sight.

 

 

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  • Lily of The Valleys
    September 18, 2007

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    Beautiful

    The clock,
    hung on the wall above the night staff desk,
    will tick away all memory of a quest

    One of the best verses. Though it doesn't use much imagery, I like that the clock above the staff desk would represent some sort of lonliness and odd serenity. That of someone who really has nothing in life but themselves.. But at the same time, has all the freedom in the world.

    I ventured out so far away from home,
    camping out beside the stillest waters
    I've ever known, and underneath the shade
    of canopies exotic to my eyes,

    Yes, again. Exotic to your eyes. Again, the sensual poetry is very appealing to me. I think this is a strong point that you've just about mastered.

    Yes, I love this poem.

  • Angel 19 1986
    September 15, 2007
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    That's good. Keep up the good writing.

  • jaciedevil
    September 9, 2007
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    wow that is so good

  • Ethereal One gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    excellent expression

    Your words express a sadness, as you see your days of exploring come to an end. It sounds like all of your senses were heightened by the time you spent in such beautiful and serene locations. The idea of getting back to the daily routines is something you were not looking forward to.

    "Soon the long dark hall will once again
    be my nightly company."

    Hold onto your memories. There was such an enchanted feel to it all.

    Ethereal One

  • Kay Laon Anders
    August 23, 2007

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    Sounds like you are dreading your routine

    "Soon I'll fight to recollect the reason
    I ventured out so far away from home,
    camping out beside the stillest waters
    I've ever known, and underneath the shade
    of canopies exotic to my eyes,"

    hopefully you won't have to fight to remember...

    Maybe you can go to different places next year during the summer break...

    "Soon I'll wonder as I check dim rooms
    if I imagined mysteries of light
    that rose above serene Wisconsin waters,"

    I remember we stopped in Wisconsin on the way to Canada one year...and across from the station we stopped at, there was a lake ...and the sun was going down so I watched it while everyone else was relieving theirselves..lol...and there were boats flying by on the water which made the sun's reflection sort of do a wave number...I was the last to get back in the car.


    "soon I'll watch adventure drift from mind,
    cast upon the seas of daily life,
    the billowed sail that held that wild wind
    shrinking in the distance from my sight."


    that is sad...but then again I day dream more than others...i tend to get my work finished to other's satisfaction but I am always day dreaming...constantly making get away plans in my head..and future dreams...

    Kay Laon

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