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Stranger

Seems like a stranger,
The person behind my mask;
She hides herself behind the white paint of innocence.
Holds her fan open, lace concealing the crystalline eyes,
She doesn't want you to know,
When she cries, she hides her eyes along with the tears.
She vanishes in thin wispy smoke,
Twirling to oblivion.
Till nobody remembers anymore.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 26, 2007
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    Thank you for your entry, Josephine


  • atkinpea
    August 24, 2007
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    clever

    wellwritten!nice as usual.i liked it a lot it was a pleasure to read.keep it up friend


  • atkinpea
    August 24, 2007
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    clever

    wellwritten!nice as usual.i liked it a lot it was a pleasure to read.keep it up friend


  • atkinpea
    August 24, 2007
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    clever

    wellwritten!nice as usual.i liked it a lot it was a pleasure to read.keep it up friend