Importunate whispers from the night,
Enticing me with a exquisite scene,
Of riding on a magic carpet,
In a tapestry embroidered dream.
Searching for our foot steps within the golden sand,
Listening to susurrus winds as I fly across land.
A contest entry
- PIF Night Owl Quickie 10/40/30 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended August 23, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lovely!
WOnderful imagery....especially liked "tapestry rmbroidered dream"
Lynda
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You have painted very beautiful dreams of arabian sands and magical carpets. I find this piece exotic and wonderfully penned. It has so many of the elements of dreams. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the best in the comp
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Awesome .. I want to go in your dreams.. TAKE ME AWAY!! lol great write.. and best of luck
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your prompt is:
"delicate flight of a dream"
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lalala.
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de da da do doom
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