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DreamWalking

Gliding out of the pine-wood frame,
Draped in a light, dew-dripping breeze;
Innocence sleeping in green eyes,
Scented silk floating in dawn mist.

Sometimes an artist remembers
To leave an exit in pictures
For fair ladies to walk out,
Like in a tender morning dream.

Sweet be the world that awaits her,
For she is unspoilt so far;
Angelic soul in mellow curves,
Femininity in perfection.

Gentle, she treads into new worlds,
Amidst the sighs from the canvas;
Unknowing, she moves to fresh paths,
May angels guard in her sleep-walk.

Author notes

Do girls in pictures sleep-walk out of their frames?

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 11, 2008

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    G'Day Sunflowerbeauty

    What an image you created in my head.
    I love the final line; such masterful beauty

    .♥.
    Thank you for your entry
    Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


    • sunflowerpoet
      February 11, 2008
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      Dear Manda,
      Thanks for the kind comments I am happy that you loved the entry... Take care..
      Hugz,
      Sunflower.


  • Erin200
    August 23, 2007

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    This is a wonderful poem. You did a good job on it and I really enjoyed reading it. Great job and keep writing!

    -Karin-