Tears soaking her pillow
as she called out his name,
her fingers groped the bed spread,
and cluchthed air,
her love so lucid even at midnight.
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A contest entry
- 30 words or less...Prompt by mysticstorm.
425 points, ended August 23, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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despair and lost, clutched air..not even straw..pathetic moment captured lucidly
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Thank you for your kind comment!
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Very strong and deeply sad. Another beautiful and creative take on the word.
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Glad you liked it....
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aww sad...
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My point exactly! Thanks for dropping by!
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