You are a sex straved artist craving sin. Writing beautiful verses to captivate the soul of another. All I want to do is push you against a wall and lean into you. I feel every inch of your body moving against mine. Reading between the lines never did us much good. We broke the lines, we broke the rules, we broke into eachother. Lust not love is what drives us, both of us. We tell the world we'll wait for this wonderfully, beautiful and oh-so tragic romance to change our lives, but we both know the truth. Late night phone calls and drinks on the porch. Last chances in our nights. I want to be beside you when we fall out of this world. You want me to be there when you wake back up in this one.
Author notes
actually about a kid I know...randomly came to me when I sat down.
A contest entry
- Secret admirer by Mykeee.
850 points, ended August 31, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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'I want to be beside you when we fall out of this world. You want me to be there when you wake back up in this one.' - God. I mean seriously, this is amazing lol. The imagery and the inspiration I get from this poem, its like captivating intrinsic whims in a bottle. Can I add you as a favourite?
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I would be perfectly fine with that. Currently I am going to go and check your writing.
and thank you!
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Ok - Great imagery and capturing that lustful want. ~ good luck
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I like the title and the poem was awesome. Just a few typos. Nothing major. It was really good!!!!!!!
Guin
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