Paint me.
Paint where no one can see
So your ink floods my soul with the pleasure of pain
Paint me.
Paint the beauty of your imagination so that no one realizes
the boldness of your creativity.
Fill your brush with the imagery that I dictate.
Your hands caress my flesh as I allow your dubious opus to materialize.
Inject my spine with the ink of promiscuity.
I blush the color of your realization as it penetrates my memory.
Please................paint me.
Swaddle my breast before you
so that my revelation will show your intensity of design and desire.
Paint me
so you will know the pain is my pleasure.
My tolerance brings ecstasy
I become your canvas to the world but only upon stipulations of admiration.
You have known.........
I have shown.......
The world the van Gogh of flesh,
The model of Monet.
Do you paint me with the strokes of you blind passion?
Your bristles of desire?
Or am I just satisfying my own masochistic needs with my own vision of public voyeurism?
O you tickle me so.
Scribble your lashes across my back like the defiant concubine glaring back at you.
Paint me my love,
Paint me the colors of the seasons
So they will warm the frozen portrait that demands attention,
During our winters of discontent.
My blood reveals the virginity that has been broken
Delicacy is not an option
Paw my flesh, wrestle my body and violate what can't be reversed
My love
Our time has ended and your admiration is evident
But it,
I
Can no more be yours
I leave you with thoughts of taking from you what can not be replaced
My flesh and soul is now
The canvas of your memories
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A contest entry
- Ends Tonight : Anything From Anyone (well, almost anything) by Cherokee.
450 points, ended August 23, 2007, 6 entries
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" Paint me
so you will know the pain is my pleasure.
My tolerance brings ecstasy "
WoW this is really deep, I just loved the whole write.
Very powerful ending, magnificent writing.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Thanks so much it was a vision of intense beauty
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Love beautiful ink, and this my friend is all that. Very creative I must say, as your work always is.
What a wonderful penn you have here and thanks for sharing.
CoCo♥
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thank U sweetie
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I love the feel to this and I adore tattoos. They can reveal so much about a person. There is something quite sensual about them.
~Sweetness~
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Me too. This is where I got it from:
it represented a woman walking down the street so feminine but her inner strength was told by her tattoos.
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Is this metaphorical painting? I thought of real painting of the body when I read the piece. "Paint where no one can see," you said. I've always been intrigued that body painting is often placed where the person who is painted cannot see it. Not sure if that'a a relevant comment but your write is interesting.
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Tattoos and intimate body painting. But good way of thinking on it
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I love tattoos... but I'm scared of Hepatitis... so... Thank you for entering. Creative.
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thanks
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You have given me a inside view of the lady covered in the tats; and I see it can produce a sensual type exuberance...in the wearer......write on...novy
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Thanks - this was a great feel to the whole premise ~ myKey
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Excellent!
I love this line:
"I blush the color of your realization as it penetrates my memory. "
and the Van Gogh of flesh... Excellent.
An amazingly sensual piece. You grabbed me with your title and kept me with your words. Building this to the point of:
"My blood reveals the virginity that has been broken
Delicacy is not an option
Paw my flesh, wrestle my body and violate what can't be reversed"
And then the calm...goodbye.
Too wonderful. I loved this. ~Pamela
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Blushing again, I loved this poem because it represented a woman walking down the street so feminine but her inner strength was told by her tattoo. Thank you so much, I really appreciate your encouraging words ~ Mikeeee
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My pleasure. This was so well done. A woman's strength is so often overlooked or hidden from view. It is good that you could recognize it AND write it.
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