Loving smile
Grimace on face
Lost of words
With nothing but fate
Looking up
In those sky blue eyes
Wondering what to say
Wondering what I feel
I whisper a thought
And he laughs quietly
"Say it again"
Smiling that smile
I say again
Those small little words
"You're my parasite
And I want to be your last victim"
There it is
That perfect smile
With dancing eyes
As I regret what I said
"Never mind" I say
Feeling so stupid
He kisses my lips
And says "my final victim"
Author notes
venom in our veins. option #2 "You're my parasite and
I want to be your last victim.." hope you like it =]
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Comments
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this was great. I really liked it. the whole parasite thing is actually a fancy of mine. I think I enjoyed this above everything else I've done today. shine
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Oh, this was great.
Really.
I loved how you used the quote.
I had know idea someone would it in a such a, dare I say, ROMANTIC way.
Really.
I loved it.
<3
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great write well done
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