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It would be easier
To catch a rainbow in a ziplock bag,
To force the seven seas into a paper cup,
To stuff a field of sunflowers into a single vase
Than to write a poem that captures your spirit,
My friend.

You are a great poet for the same reasons
That you are a great friend . . .
Because both come as naturally to you as breathing;
Because it is your nature to celebrate your life
And to help others learn how they can do the same.
Because you can't not write
Just as you can't not be compassionate.

You are a force of nature.
You are one of the rare souls of this world
Who actually lives up to their name.
There is warm, yellow, welcoming light wherever you are
And those stumbling in the darkness are drawn to it.
Your messages are sent into the world
naturally, effortlessly, without judgment
Like rays from a lighthouse
Helping those lost in fog find their way home.

Mother Teresa said very few of us can do great things
But all of us can do small things with great love.
That's why your poems are loved by so many -
Because they are full of your essence, which is love.

Love, a word so overused

It has become almost meaningless.
But you have given it new life.
You have mastered it
While most of humanity is perpetually locked
In petty grievances and self-doubt.

Jesus said, "When they ask for your cloak,
Give them your coat as well."
And I can imagine Him sitting on His throne
In a classroom of angels,
Looking down through the clouds
To your street and into your garden
As you share a story with children
Or write a poem of hope for someone
As the leaves fall outside your window.
And I can imagine Him saying to them,
"Watch her.  She knows what I meant

And she's one of the few who actually lives it."


Yes, I'm sure that He is very proud of you.

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  • FallingTwilight
    October 9, 2007

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    Oh wow, this is such a beautiful tribute. The metaphors and other techniques you've used are original and heartfelt. Congrats on your h.m.,

    -Kaitlyn


  • TillyMay
    September 28, 2007

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    Mark- you never fail to delight. This tribute is beautiful without being sappy- it is inspiring-it makes me want to be better- stronger and more compassionate... Your words are heartfelt and touching, real and engaging. Nicely done, mate. Nicely done. x


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    September 20, 2007

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    Such a beautiful poem and tribute to a friend,
    i loved the vocabulary you used, the metaphors are magic.

    Mark, one can see that you have put a lot of effort into this lovely poem, i am surprised it only got HM... It should have been gold.
    Slán Dolores x


  • Grieving-Willow
    September 6, 2007

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    Whoa? Honorable Mention? I would have given you the trophy! Afterall, you are the greatest writer of all time, or at the very least, to me you are A masterpiece as always, how I admire your work...


  • Evolutionary45
    August 27, 2007

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    GREAT TRIBUTE.

    Cheers


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    Very fitting...truth personified.


  • klassy lassy
    August 23, 2007

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    Ah! Our Night Hope does have all these qualities and she shares so readily of them all. You are not missing any of these qualities, either, nor an opportunity to high light the good of those you know. You can't capture Wanda's spirit in a bag or a paper cup, but it enbraces her friends, and fills their hearts to capacity. It certainly shows here. I heartily applaud! Karen


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 23, 2007

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    This is a lovely letter-poem you've written for Wandaa, Mark and I smiled when I read "stuff a field of sunflowers into a single vase" - that is so lovely and shows how it's almost impossible to capture her light and her essence. I know she'll love this poem - thank you for sharing it.

    ~ Nicolette

  • Cat gold member
    August 23, 2007

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    This is a beautiful letter you have written to wanda- so full of what most of us wish we could express - ever notice that when you post a poem she is always the first to comment?- and it's just because she knows that it means alot to us- you've captured her essence here.. wonderfully done

    m

  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    August 23, 2007
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    Wow! What a gift you've given Wanda.

    ~Lyrical


  • arafura
    August 23, 2007

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    wow...

    A lovely tribute to a gifted and beautiful poet! You said everything I would like to say about her... but I lack your skill in expressing admiration!
    Great write!


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 22, 2007

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    What an awesome poem for an awesome friend and poetess. You hace written truth that trails down the page like a testament.


  • MuddyKing gold member
    August 22, 2007
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    excellent

    forgot these


  • PageTurner
    August 22, 2007

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    Oh WOW! You have captured every essence of our Wanda and your eloquent penning has made it MORE real (if that's possible). Wanda will weep with joy at this incredible tribute to her. Ya touch me with your heartfelt words...

    "There is warm, yellow, welcoming light wherever you are
    And those stumbling in the darkness are drawn to it."

    So True, Scribe! ~ Nicholas


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 22, 2007

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    "Because both come as naturally to you as breathing;
    Because it is your nature to celebrate your life
    And to help others learn how they can do the same."

    If I have shown one person how to do just that, then my life will not have been in vain.


    "You are a force of nature.
    You are one of the rare souls of this world
    Who actually lives up to their name.
    There is warm, yellow, welcoming light wherever you are
    And those stumbling in the darkness are drawn to it."

    There are so many lost souls in the world, my dear Friend. Those of us who hold compasses simply must give directions, having been lost in the shadows ourselves.


    "Mother Teresa said very few of us can do great things
    But all of us can do small things with great love."

    She also said, "If you give what you do not need, it isn't giving."

    I love this poem & the Scribe who wrote it. Mark, you were one of the very first people to start reading my poems over 3 years ago. I have never forgotten your wondrous words of support, your unfailing & generous encouragement, your incredible sense of humor & your amazing depth of spirit. Thank you so much for penning this beauty for me. Good luck in the contest, Sweetie. You are a magnificent Soul. AND you like The Three Stooges, too. Wanda


    • MuddyKing gold member
      August 22, 2007
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      this one will be hard to beat...I know Wanda loves it
      wonderful piece poet
      best wishes
      peace Muddy
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