Last night I just sat there
And watched her sleep
So peaceful, so serene
It was a calming effect
Knowing she cared
But still trusts me
Inner and outer beauty
Portrayed in dreamless slumber
Watching from the outside
As she slept in my bed.
A contest entry
- ~MY ONE YEAR ANNIVERSARY~ Celebrate With Me by Still Standing.
850 points, ended October 29, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful!
This was so simple and sweet and very well put. Great images. How I long to be the dreamer. Thanks for entering and good luck! -
I remember the days my husband did that and described what it felt to him, but geez it does go away one day so anyone that experiences this must savor the moment and savor these words that you penned. Excellent. Blessings.
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fantastic as always
*hugs and kisses*
beautiful
why cant i be as great a writer as you my sister?!
love x -
:: hugs tightly ::
I... I'm not sure... what to say...
I love you Snaddy
:: hugs ::
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