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I watched her sleep



Last night I just sat there
And watched her sleep
So peaceful, so serene
It was a calming effect
Knowing she cared
But still trusts me
Inner and outer beauty
Portrayed in dreamless slumber
Watching from the outside
As she slept in my bed.

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  • Dolly-naomi
    August 26, 2007
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    fantastic as always

    *hugs and kisses*
    beautiful
    why cant i be as great a writer as you my sister?!
    love x

  • Daichi
    August 23, 2007
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    :: hugs tightly ::
    I... I'm not sure... what to say...
    I love you Snaddy
    :: hugs ::