Iridescent shape-shifters quietly roam the halls
Their mission here to balance their
Kharmic debts of olde
Learning new
Balance
Olde
Khar-
Ma
Builds
Strongly
Good or bad
Learn from this visit
They whisper advice about Life
My current status this Lifetime -- a soul on parole
Searching for Balance ©Lady Dragonwyck
(22 August 2007)
A contest entry
- SOLVE DAVINCI’S SECRET CODE—The SEQUEL by micol.
700 points, ended August 26, 2007, 2 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow this was great
Most worthy of the gold! The ole' Karma ideals, leads me to believe perhaps you might have some connection with the late 60's perhaps? Great time it was.
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Excellent
Lady D, you have outdone yourself again, my dear friend.
This is wonderfully penned write.
This is an excellent poetry form.
Well done my friend.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
*S* Cynthia
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Nicely done in all respects. You embued the poem with philosophical depth while never ignoring the fact that it was a poem, a structure of imagery, an artifact of words. And you used the form well, bringing the more generalized opening line down to half of a single word, then expanding out to the essence of the poem, the final phrase. Well done.
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Interesting form. What exactly is it? It made a great shape!!
You did an absolutely wonderful job of displaying this poem. I emotionally felt related, especially with the line "A soul on parole". Very deep expression to ponder on.
Balance is one of the hardest aspects of life to hold on to. With society, its either black or white. The in between causes chaos in the minds of the feeble.
Absolutely wonderful job!!
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Oh my
This is brilliant dear poetess. I love the shape and stresses of Khar - Ma and I felt this deep inside. oooh.
A soul on parole...interesting phrase and simply stunning. Excellence as I have come to expect. Best of luck in this contest. Wonderful words here. ~Pamela
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