To lose a friend..
The wait was to long
Our love was shown
I should've known
The wait was too long
How I wanted it
You and me
That I didn't count on destiny
Goodbye my love
I loved you
Goodbye my love
I waited for you
Its hard to let go
When I have memories forever
And cold you will remain
Your love kept me sane
Goodbye my love
I'm sorry
That I couldn't give you what you need
To faraway, to long it seems
But I loved you
And I wanted you to be happy
But if this is how it has to be
So be it
Smile now in your sleep
I'll pray that someday
You'll remember me
Goodbye my love
I love you my darling
Have a good sleep
Someday.. please.. think of me~
To whom I lost..
To whom I loved.
Author notes
(This option in the contest is Three..the movie is Tuck Ever Lasting) The poem also has a deeper meaning about my life.. saying goodbye to a dear, old friend
A contest entry
- Experience and Emotion by Dreams27.
450 points, ended August 24, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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to loose someone you love is a harsh thing its great to write such a deep poem about it
keep up the fabulous work
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it's hard having to say goodbye to those who are dear to us. A very good piece, the emotion flowed well. thanks for the entry, take care, Sam (Dreams27) xxx
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