Maybe...
just maybe
I can take away your pain
make your sadness go away
Maybe
I can make the tears stop
make the memories fade
Maybe
I can end it all
make the problem fall
I could put her into the ground
kicking and screaming
I could stick her with foot long pins
piercing her still beating heart
I could make it slow
or end it quick
I can only imagine the way she'll struggle
the sound of her terrified screams
the tears that will fall
But I could end it all
I can give her life...or I can take it away
maybe if she begs I'll let her stay
I'll stick her in a cage
and watch her age
I'll cause her pain
maybe I'm a little sick and kinda insane
but I want to end it all
I want to watch her fall
The life draining out of her eyes
struggling to breath
I'll watch as she dies
She's the only thing
standing in my way
she's the one causing you pain
so I don't care how she begs
I'll slowly saw off her kicking legs
as she screams
I'll sew her mouth shut
I'll kill that stupid slut
I want to make her suffer
torture her for hours
drowning her until she's out of breath
only a few seconds before she's claimed by death
then bring her back
and do it again
I want to chain her to a wall
and drip acid on her
watching the skin burn
I want to cut into her with a rusty knife
slowly draining her life
I'll set her free
and watch her run
chasing her
and hunting her like an animal
gut her
and watch her bleed
I want to hear her scream and cry
but most of all I just want to watch her die
I want to end it all
I want to watch her fall
Author notes
This is one of my more morbid poems...it's kinda a sick twisted fantasy I recentaly started thinking about...and if I could...I'd prolly kill her...make her suffer cause her pain...I'm not crazy...I'm not insane...just different! I hope you like it!
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Set the world afire just to see the the flames flicker in the lit up eyes of their happy face would ya.
I know the devoted feeling.
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Very sadistic. But it makes a really awesome poem. I like how it starts out sweet and turns dark really quickly. As for a sick and twisted fanatasy, I say as long as you don't do it in real life I'm totally cool with it. Everyone's got a dark Hannibal Lector hidden within, it's when they show it that it gets out of line. Love this poem!
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This is very... hmm... horrifying? To think about it, I mean to picture in my head. But it's a wonderful poem no doubt, I know what it feels like to want to cause someone pain, although I'd probably never do it. Great write!
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wow i love it, its twisted yet intersting to read. great write, absolutly love it
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I like the changes.. hehe
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still not done!
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Hehe, i know.. mines not either
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a backstabbing friend? or just anger?
tis good and angry, yet not really emo...it made me laugh and fear for my life at the same time.
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Yeah...it's actually my bf's ex gf...she's bothering him and it's gone to far...I want to make her stop....^_^ enven if it costs me her life....! Thanks for the comment...I fin'd it hard to write emo like...I just like the violent angry writing style when I'm pissed! Much love...and thanks again!
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oww...you dont want to kill anyone..to messy, you always stain your favorite clothing article...major suckage.
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Its ok thats why people made bleach
.. oh yea and a washing machine so you dont have to do manual labor
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Sick, and Twisted
Yet oddly amusing, i love this poem, in more ways then one, and probably will respond shortly with another poem...
I really like the fact that this could (from my POV) could be talking about your mom or Jessica, !!.. lol sorry as i read it clicked with her, buit then the thought of your mom made me smile for a slight second . jk i love you mom *watches for your mom*..
*hides*,..
Another amazing poem by an amazing girlfriend~!
Love Khaos
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....it wasn't about my mom.....-_-'...I know it's not my place but I was angry!
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Hehe i know , and im sorry you were angry i didnt mean to make you angry.
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It wasn't your fault...I've been mad at her for everything she did to you since I've known about it...but I just couldn't take it anymore...but it's not your fault...it's hers...she hurt some one I love and she continues to do so...and I want it to stop! I love you Khaos!
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