A little girls heartbreak, alone and scared
No one but a teddy, to hold and be there
Frightened from the world, with nothing but pain
A girl of about 13, hiding her head in shame
She is but a child, But her pain is so clear
what have they done to her, to bring so many tears
Why is she alone, in a corner by herself
Where is her family, someone to try and help
I see so much pain, A picture Of despair
Is someone there to comfort her, just to let her no they care
Why all the sadness in this little girls eyes
Has she been forgotten, in a world filled with lies
Please someone reach out to her, let her feel love
For she was an angel for us, sent from god above
Please listen to her cries, Her pain and fears
Help her through her anguish, wipe away her tears
A little girl broken, from a world full of hate
Someone needs to help her before it is to late......
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A contest entry
- The Best/Worst Day Of Your Life...So Far by Death of the Author.
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i'm increadibly impressed with this poem and to be entirely honest it makes me think of when i was around 13 when my stepdad used to beat me and how helpless i seem and how i believed the world would never do anything to help me i adore this poem and i'm so happy you entered so that i could read it. this poem flows and rhymes very very well you could almost sing it to yourself and i wish you the best of luck in the contest thank you for entering
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This is beautiful, you have expressed you caring nature very well. The flow and sad imagery is superb. Very well written indeed, best of luck in the contest! -
Loved the rhyme scheme, especially the last two lines, really great. This spoke out to me as this is what a lot of young people go through and I can't help but be angry with those that hurt, harass or abandon children who are suffering. Beautifully written though with much passion and truth. If this is about you, you can always talk to me anytime ♥
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This is very sad...especially as I know it happens so often...children abused, or often just neglected, too scared to reach out to someone for fear it will happen again. Thank you for your entry and good luck
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