Cocoon me baby deep with in your
Endorphin laced Eden
Where the diamonds sparkle in the sky
Dripping from the lace of your shattered desires
Push me baby, into your morphine induced coma
Let me hear the cries, even though I'm deaf
to everything but me
Cocoon me baby deep within your Eden
Lock me away like the sin you deny
Beneath your cerulean eyes
Jaded and shaded with clouds of spider webs
Cover me and it all up with the heavy
Weight of your denied dream comforter
Cocoon me baby deep within
Deep within your Eden
Author notes
wordbank B:
lace
morphine
endorphin
diamond
coma
cocoon
Eden
deaf
Venom In Our Veins'
A contest entry
- Doctor Blind, my baby's drooling acid.. by AshtrayBaby.
1250 points, ended August 28, 2007, 9 entries
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Oh my Godddd.
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Which sucks.
Because it'll be hard to judge.
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I.absolutely.fucking.LOVE the way you used the wordbank.
Really.
I've said this a couple times now but it's the goddamn truth.
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