Plump versus petite.
Blah! What an ugly word petite
it sounds like eat
and that's just what petite women should do.
Plump is rich on the tongue
falls right out
and on to the floor,
just say it and you'll see.
'plump'.
There it goes!
I met a woman yesterday,
who is a mockery of a woman
a little twiggy
not at all piggy
except for her attitude.
And she relished the mirror
in passing took to gazing.
'I'm on a diet!'
she uttered
when a pound of cake
was pushed in her sucked in face.
Emaciated,
like an actual size Barbie doll
and I wanted to break her
for her depleted appetite,
(funny how petite lies in the word appetite)
I met a woman yesterday,
my what a woman did I meet.
She had long curls stretching
and relaxing down the middle of her back.
Her clothes she wore were comfortable
and affordable.
She didn't faze herself
with immature magazines
but pined over many things
that only real people
with plump brains
could pine over.
If I had her picture I would frame it.
Author notes
I Like Soft Women
by nevile
Alexadrathegreat
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A contest entry
- a contest for my favourites and some select others... by imgone.
1000 points, ended September 7, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Size zero by Entwining Beauty.
300 points, ended September 11, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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great piece here
subject matter
flow just and excellent read
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please dont reply i like a no named contest it seems fair
wow this is amazingly done good luck in my contest and thank you so much
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I think you managed
to capture what he expressed in his piece and make it your own... well done!
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wow i love this poem it flows like a drink of water and very refreshing. great work sister
good luck in the contest
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twiggy women, ugly as snapping turtles and twice as mean...usually...vanity supreme...now, to me, a woman's eyes is their most important attribute, physically, that is, followed by legs and closly related areas. But twiggy, yuck! What I really like is whats between their ears and behind their sternum.
and a plain woman who is comfortable with herself is "always" ten times prettier than a beautiful woman, who isn't.
Nice write Alex, provocation of thought, and a big meal
len
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I'm liking you more ...
... having read this piece, which had me in stiches. Well done!
A60sMan
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