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“My life saved by the view!”



Like a bridge over trouble water
softly lite with the setting sun
so faint the shine it hides
deep inside itself from everyone

the color coming forth
from above, below and through
this massively appearing bridge
I thought Oh GOD it’s so beautiful
it had to be made by you

it hides well the sorrows
that it feels when crossed
by those heart broke and sad ones

I set here on this beach of white sand
looking, inhaling and imagining
the stories that have crossed this one

colors grow deeper as the day goes by
there are brown, red, yellow and orange
or at least that's what I view
I’m sure that there would be other colors
if viewed by you
I think  they would not be the same
by another one

I brought with me a potion
of arsenic and fruit juice
I planned this to be my life’s final view
right here in this beautiful place
all dressed up in lace

I can not sip from this deadly cup
never again to see colors as I now do

I think I’ll rest here awhile
before saying farewell to you!









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by: JAD 8/03/07
AssignmentBy: assignment 4 for AP class: All fiction!

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