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Stirred by silence

Emotions dripping-
In vain, stirred by silence.

Time paused [Needle pricked]

Heartbeats remote [Maybe lost]
and full of shame.
Like a candle wax burning-
my use to be white skin.

Flattered answers-
causing wisdom to float-
                                          over reality.

We use to dwell in the same shell. [Wishing it is still the same]

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Written August 22, 2007

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 30, 2007
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    I feel sadness
    and a sense of
    longing for
    what was once

    wishing for what
    one had

  • the chase
    August 26, 2007
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    Sadness. Thank you for entering.