Dear Daddy,
[[I miss you]] picking me up from school,
[[I miss you]] hugging and kissing me,
[[I miss you]] telling me I'm a fool,
[[I miss you]] letting me help make tea,
[[I miss you]] taking me into town,
[[I miss you]] saying your silly ryhmes,
[[I miss you]] making me smile when I frown,
[[I miss you]] letting me down sometimes,
Love, Hugs, & Kisses
Your Special Princess Poppet
oOo xXx <3<3<3
P.S. I MISS YOU SOOOO MUCH!!
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Option 2
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A contest entry
- Experience and Emotion by Dreams27.
450 points, ended August 24, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awww
its so sweet i just want to cry! it sucks he's in another country. want my dad? well, i don't think you'd like him either. but a great poem nonetheless! -
Hello AP sister.
im sorry for not commenting as much as i should. i have been so distracted with school! how have you been?!
this poem makes me feel so sad. i am soo sorry about your dad. i would miss my dad too. if there is ever anything i can do to help you, let me know okay?
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sweet :)
this is really sweet. although it really does sound like he's dead, rather than living somewhere else, but i understand because my dad also lives far from home. overall, though, i think this is a well-written poem, and i like the rhyme
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awww, so sweet! Such a cute little poem! I'm sorry that you have lost your father. This is a well written poem, in such a short and simple piece you do put accross emotion!!! I like the rhyme, add effect and is well done, not forced at all!! thanks for entering! take care, Sam (Dreams27) xxx
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He's not dead, he just lives in another country. Thanx
Savvy
oxox
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