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A broken love, is better than none

Can I miss warmth when I never had it?

Craving heartbreak.
For the love that came before it

Not minding the alone
For the together that preceded it.

Not caring if I was broken
Because I would have been more than whole before


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  • Chelseanicolex
    October 10, 2007

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    I am captivated

    It makes heartbreak seem surreal. I really like this. Although it was short, it was to the point. Beautiful thought.


  • lost-in-yesterday
    September 6, 2007

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    i never gave this topic this kind of thought. you have a way of looking at things. i like it this is really good sis!!!


  • Dalawa
    August 24, 2007

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    I've never thought like that before, but now... I think I'm convinced
    Beautifully written!


  • pattyann4500
    August 22, 2007

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    This has a bitter taste to its sadness. Beautifully written, lovely words that have such vivid meaning. You are such a talented young lady. Love, your AP Mom