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Fucked Up Family

I'VE NEVER FELT LIKE I'VE BELONGED,
IN YOUR FUCKED-UP FAMILY
YOU MADE ME FEEL LIKE A DISEASE,
AND FOR A TIME IT BROUGHT ME TO MY KNEES
I WISHED THAT I WOULD DIE
BUT NO LONGER WILL I CRY
FOR YOUR FUCKED UP FAMILY
BURIED DEEP IN YOUR OWN SHIT
WELL I QUIT
I WANT A FUTURE
SOMEPLACE ELSE,
AS SOMEONE ELSE

Author notes

love happens once in a lifetime. the difference lies in how many time you're willing to live in the time that you're alive.

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  • passionate-poet
    November 3, 2007
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    ur not the only one thats felt this way. thanks for the terrific share and keep your head up.


  • eatingupyourmind
    September 17, 2007
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    i love the anger that is brought out so well in this poem, well done


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    August 30, 2007

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    Really speaks out...love isn't worth it, if someone is to the point of feeling death knocking, both emotionally and literally.... ~jeremi


  • whiterabbit.
    August 22, 2007
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    I really like the strong emotions here. It goes from showing sadness to deep anger. Great job.