Dear Edward,
I know you think we have to be apart. Don't you see, I don't care that you want to take the blood from my veins. You were meant for me and I was meant for you.
We have to be together for eternity. I am not afraid of you or your lust. I'm sorry that you have to try so hard just to nuzzle your nose in my hair, but I can't live without the feeling of you near me or the smell of your breath. Stay with me and we'll always be happy. I'll love you til the end of my mortal life, or longer if you change me.
♥I'll love you always♥
Isabella Swan
Author notes
Option 1 - the note to edward thingy xD
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Great!!
I absolutely loved this!! It made me think of New Moon and that's good considering only 18 days and it will be out.. =D It deffly sounds like something Bella wouldn't be able to say to his face therefore she has to write a little love letter.
Brilliant!
Great write and good luck!!!
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i love this poem it tells how much bella wants to be changed so she can spend her life with edward she wants to be a vampire but edward doesn't want to change her yet good poem
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very sweet!
i quiet like this one, it does show the love she has for him she's willing to give herself up to him, and i liked how you used the word "mortal life" it sort of reminded me of the part in new moon when he tells her he's leaving her and she says "this is about my soul, i dont care take it, its already yours!" veryy verryy sweet write!!!! good luck in the contest!!!
P.S for those of you who havent read new moon yet sorry for giving the very slightst away! but believe me...thats nothing!.... -
XxX-Twilight-XxX nevermind. i'll just leave a comment saying your name so i know who you are. you poem won't be deleted
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soo sorry!!!!! my mom grounded me from the computer
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you need to have your username in your authors notes by later tonight or your poem will be deleted. sorry.
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awwwww... im just loving everyones writes for this contest. i really enjoy this. so simple yet so sweet. wonderful job
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i already commented on this, so i still feel the same about it. but you need to add your username please.
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great! i love this. i think you really tuned into her thoughts.
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This is great! I'm absolutley obsessed with the series. As you can tell by my screen name =]. I connot wait for this year to get over so the new book will come out! Breaking Dawn!
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I like it. The format could use a bit of work...it seems so condensed. But it's a very sweet poem, I like the last sentence. It made me smile, I've always been a huge fan of vampire romance.
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Nice--you captured the tone of longing well. Even though it is prose, there is a strong poetic rhythm in the sentences. Makes it read like music. Well done.
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I haven't read Eclipse Yet, I'm getting it on Wednesday, I love this though!!
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cool
wow i reminds me of prites of the carriben! yay the carriben! 'HUGS CARRIBEN"
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