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If You Love

if you love me
you'll not hurt me
if you love me
you'd secure me
you'll cherish me
and forgive me
love is love
pain is not
love is care
shout is not
love is tender
fear is not
I can die
but love shall not

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  • Mujtaba H Zaidi
    August 27, 2007
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    Great !

    Very beautifully written poem dear friend!


  • Pixie Girl
    August 22, 2007

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    this is short and sweet. you've got a grea base. maybe put some more words into it and it'll be great! good work.