beauty sanctified
serenity secular
extremes of opposites…
enshrouded within a sacred
journey of disenchantment -
a hopelessness disregarded
impounded within a pained
vision of incapacitation –
a longing unobserved
draped within a tombed
robe of enthroned beauty –
a crypt of pain
relinquished within a silent
affliction of nature’s serenity –
a sacrifice of love
beauty secular
serenity sanctified
extremes of desecration…
In a list
A contest entry
- pic inspired by serenity silvermoon.
600 points, ended September 5, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - *** Untitled Contest *** by Hebz.
425 points, ended September 21, 2007, 74 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i really didnt like this poem i fell as if its boring
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Wow!! Great write!!Love the flow to it
Thnx for entering & best of luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
Your poem ponders elements ...
which in totality make a whole. YET: the words speak of paradoxes of the human condition; of femininity in disregard. It speaks of the silent suffering of millions of women, offering that which is sacred for some
tombed
robe of enthroned beauty –
a crypt of pain
It is a poem of outcry on behalf of those who are often silenced by social ignorance and sanctions.
You have interpreted the visual prompt well.
Good luck in the contest, Poet.
Edengroete
Myra
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myrataal
You have struck the cord! Thank you for your delightful comments. I cherish your input.
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Wow!! I can see why this was a contest entry...best of luck in them both. This poem's awesome. I love the imagery conjured by this poem...I am wondering what pic inspired this write. Great job!! Mystical
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vierna
Go to: pic inspired by serenity silvermoon and take a look at the picture. I think because I am a non-paying member that I cannot download pictures. Thank you for your comment.
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