snow algae bloomed;
pale bruises whispered to the horizon,
obscuring the sun
behind tailor-made white rabbits
autumn
leaked through the heavens,
treetops recoiled & shed their skins
in a torrent of russet rain
she lay,
finding her fate in the sky,
ignoring kiss-cuts he left in her heart
& the tearstains made with indelible inks
that never fade away.
A contest entry
- By Tonight by amaranthine lover.
450 points, ended August 24, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Woah, this poem sure does make one think.
i love it.
Awesomely vivid.
xx
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thankyou very much for your comment
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soft, soothing and so very sad. Lovely images into mine mind...
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this is gorgeous, absolutely fricking beautiful love the imagery used
thanks so much for entering
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thankyou very much for the gold
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