When I'm lost in thought,
my happiness is short,
thinking back to
my best lived days,
saddens me, in some ways.
So unfair,I
can't go back there.
Life is forever changing,
some changes we plan,
others we aren't aware.
Imagine if life
had an option to pause,
or rewind,replay,
Record and repeat,
life would be complete.
Mistakes made, you could simply delete.
Life moves in one direction,
leaving us memories,
for our reflection.
This is where my sadness lies,
looking at the past
with tears in my eyes.
To go back to my wedding day,
or to when I got my back pay,
return to childhood,
feeling loved and understood.
Sadness for what's left behind,
as the twist and turns of life unwind.
A contest entry
- WHAT MAKES YOU SAD by WillAlwaysLove.
600 points, ended August 23, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Comments
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Brilliant write your very talented
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Nice write, thank you for entering.




