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Fire Salvage




                 



My world has gone aflame.
Bridges before me have been burned.
I can not turn back.
The road in my wake is but a glowing cinder
fueled by the flammability of my transgressions.

When things were fresh and new
the path of the living journey
blossomed with opportunity.
I had my chance.
God made me an offer
I should not have refused.
Foolishly, I turned it down.
I procrastinated and lost.

Standing in the disarray of smoldering ash
I muse –
Will this Dante’s Inferno be my eternal abode?
I fear that it will –
I am charred black with sin.
God doesn’t go to fire salvage sales.

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  • heygoo
    August 22, 2007

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    "God doesn’t go to fire salvage sales." Well sure He does! Do not give up on your soul God never does. Very raw and emotional piece.