Roses are red
Violets are blue
Although that's cliche
Isn't it true?
When the world sinks to quiet
And everything sleeps
Let's start a riot
Since anarchy seeps
Into our minds
Into my heart
Into strong things that bind
And make you wake with a start
While the world lies in slumber
The great mind awakes
Conspirators brew thunder
And cultists charm snakes
Anarchists lay new plans
Of freedom and soul
Before government bans
Simply the birth of a foal
New Life may feel healthy
But not to a fiend
Suppressors are stealthy
But their blight had to have seemed
Oddly suspicious
And sometimes quite brusque
Madly sacreligious
And even without rhyme
But no crazed thought compares
To the fact that you're hot and dares
To speak out
And shares
The soft thought to reach
Like a first kiss on a beach
To speak out
And teach
What love can be
And though no one may yet know it
Many will one day see
That beauty and love don't always have to fit
Sometimes I feel confused
And now my heart jumps, skips some beats
Was I fool to believe
Everything sleeps?
Author notes
Written for a girl.
How is it?
Comments
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awesome.
I really like it. A lot of people really don't like love poems, because they're so hard to do right, but i think at some time all of us have managed to write one that really says the proper thing, without just corny rambling. I really like it because it seems real... It doesn't sound like you're trying to be romantic, just that you're writing out your emotions, which i think is what poetry is all about. I agree with Fromtheheart140, that was my favorite part, too.
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Very Good
It was deep and emotional. Whatever girl you wrote this for must have had a special place in your heart. It was just so......pure. Can you describe a poem like that? I'm not quite sure. :-)
I loved this part:
" Oddly suspicious
And sometimes quite brusque
Madly sacreligious
And even without rhyme"
It put a smile on my face. I love it when people through in something like that.
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