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Hidden Agenda

You'd think that just for once, all of these captured--
no, these held away demons would dissipate themselves
alongside the brick concaves of life- leaving only
a mere transfixed alteration of escape


And yes, that was what I had done:
    Ran away to hide,
    searched for the defition all over again,
    returned home without an answer but wet nonetheless,
    and still, everything remained the same reguardless


Nevertheless, as much as this body wanted to move
in an effort to realize, nothing was prepared on
the dinner table except for another unfinished
puzzled where life provide two real factors...


Realization and impressionalism


But for some reason, the allowance of usage in the
ratios given, parts of my mind inadvertanly has enthralled
itself as yet another means of which to be recaptured
despite the endlessness of falling liquidation;
recreation of post images followed suit...hence why
of the early reciprocation (the return in other words)


Whether with or without, this was just another day
stemming inside unindulgent confinement.

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  • Mad Moon silver member
    August 22, 2007

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    The depth of thought in this is astounding! It took me a few time reading it to absorb it all! Such an honest, in-depth look into the mind of the poet... Verbiage is excellent, and well chosen to deliver the most impact. Well done, my friend...VERY well done! Hehehehe..."lost in thought...please send a search party!" LOL!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 22, 2007

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    to be honest this kind of confused me but then it didn't if that makes sense, keep it flowing, i enjoyed this poem.