I want you to fill me up with your hopes and dreams. Inject them directly into my soul. You are my heaven and my hell. There is nothing I wouldn't give up for you. Tie me up and untie me again with your screams of anguish. I'm here because of you. Without you I'd be floating down the river, helpless and lost. Our love was lost a long time ago, yet you are the only person I can turn to. If we had lasted you'd have ended up dead by my hand before you could've uttered those three hated words. So go ahead and try to break me down a little more. Break me, just so you can put the peices back together again.
Author notes
Manorexic && Nirvana's Lithium! Option # 4
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come on , take another little piece of my heart now baby,
you know you got it,
if it makes you feel good.
This reminded me of that tune.YOU JUST FREAKIN ROCK! THIS IS SO GOOD.
you like nirvana, what is the name of a song they do with Curt playing an accoustic guitar, it goes,
my girl, my girl,
where have you gone,
im going where the cold wind blows,
in the pines, in the pines,
where the sun never shines,
i'll shiver the whole night through.
i have a video tape and its the last song on an unplugged MTV special. I know its not theirs and its very old, but they did the best rendition of it i ever heard. He really belts out the end of the tune, it just does something to me, its fucking great! do you know the name of it.
LOWELL
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good job.
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Wow. I loved this. It was so passionate but yet kinda angry. I like it a lot. It had many different elemnts. And this line was so incredible. I don't know why but it kinda drew me in. Amazing piece.
Tie me up and untie me again with your screams of anguish.
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