Dear Moron,
Its been 3 weeks since you took out the trash
And there is still so much to do
Stop being your biggest obstacle
Put down the controler and quit playing PS2
Can't you at least do some laundry?
Or easily make your bed?
I don't even like going in your room sometimes
Because the smell of too much Axe makes me wanna drop dead
Why can't you wash the dishes properly?
Without breaking every plate or glass
It's not that hard to do trust me
Just please get off your a/s/s
Don't you ever wanna see me happy?
Instead of just complain
Do some chores around the house
And then you won't drive me insane
I'm not trying to be mean
But you say you can get a job
When you can't wash dishes without leaving sauce stains
Or leftover corn on the cob
Please stop giving me headaches
From the stupid things you say
Stop slamming your door all the time
And scaring the poor dog away
Stop getting me angry
And do a simple chore
Like dusting the furniture
Or even sweeping the floor
When Grandpa asks you to clean up after the dog
Or mow the lawn like your supposed to
Just say okay and get it over with
Instead of stepping in Charlies poo
I've had enough of you eating at my computer desk
Then leaving your dishes for me to clean
Just because I'm younger than you
Don't think I can't be mean
I love you alot but you get on my nerves
And it really pisses me off
When you do it just on purpose
Like that stupid bird noise and "the cough"
I don't know where you got your habits from
Not from Me, Meaghan or certainly our Mother
Maybe from Dad?
But no matter what..Your still my Brother ♥
Love, Jackie ♥
Author notes
I think this is a poem where every little Sister or Brother should go through. I know it is true. I speak with tons of experience because my Sister is 18, my Brother is 15 and I am the youngest one. ♥
A contest entry
- ♥ Letters ♥ by Atrophya.
600 points, ended August 28, 2007, 34 entries
Honorable mention
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I so know how you feel
I'm the youngest
my sis is 16 and my bro 15
They're both so lazy, so am I
but at least I do my chores
and end up doing theres too
but I do love them(sometimes)lol
your a really good poet
better than me
that's not tht hard to beat -
Oh I deffinately know what you mean. Even if I'm older. I know how my sister feels haha. It's a good poem and it made my day, really. Oh and I also loved the rhyme
Keep writing
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hrm yes. i know this very well my sister is also 18 but my younger brothers one 13 and another 10... they get annyoing but i still love them anyways good poem alot of emotion in this i can realte to the dishes thing and i hate it cause i always have to go back over them
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I don't even like going in your room sometimes
Because the smell of too much Axe makes me wanna drop dead
ah! I love the above lines...
too much perfume/deo can be killing!
I like the perspective here..its different and its got a cute rhyme to it that i like!!
Way to go!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
luv
pri
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Oh wow, this is soooo adorable. Lol, truly cute, I would so say that to my little brother if he got like this after a while.Lol. I loved it.
Thanks for entering.
GL in the contest.
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