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holding my breath

  i have simply given up on love
im tired of holding my breath
and meeting this unusual standard
that is the same as rest

i dont have any idea where i am
and i dont know what i need
ill find the perfects girls
and they are full of greed

she makes me smile she makes me laugh
she does all i want to do
i want nothing more she says
than to be with you

i gave the chance a second thought
and went ahead and dove
but it ended with friends again
and away i slowly drove

i give up on love i cant find her
i dont think she does exist
all i know is im ending life
its just a matter of who i end it with

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you want pure.. here.. have my heart

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  • Logans-Mommy
    August 21, 2007

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    my god. this was really intense. you will find her out there somewhere.. you just cant look, it never happens that way....good luck sweetie.